1. 11/03/10, 02:28 pm

Says: "Alison, Tight piece!! (in writing TIGHT is good, meaning you have composed a strong piece, no loose ends) All of the sections are good. My only suggestions are: 1- Under lessons learned, I think you could use stronger language; "improved in org skills" should be "put to work my strong organizational skills" And I would add to your core capacities: determined, tireless, hard working, focused on making sure event was a success, able to respond to the demands of many and very different individuals or juggle a myriad of requests/demands.... In time, you may want to reread the Impact of Experience and strengthen that too: as you highlight new capacities, tie them to your work in the classroom/educational community (paying attention to parents, colleagues, your students.... a similar kind of tension) That (in-the-classroom work)--I think-- might be more relevant than "The committee co-chairs and I formed a trusting relationship, in which they encouraged me to pursue my passion. But...give it some time until you see that relationship. Amazing progress since 1st EoW to this one!!!!"